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by Smiler77
Fri Sep 04, 2009 3:34 pm
Forum: Promotions Forum
Topic: A short story.. looking for feedback
Replies: 3
Views: 57

Re: A short story.. looking for feedback

I know what paragraphs are.. I just copied and pasted it from the site I publish on and the format has changed. I am more interested in what people think of the actual writing, and less interested in criticisms about the layout.
by Smiler77
Fri Sep 04, 2009 2:50 pm
Forum: Promotions Forum
Topic: A short story.. looking for feedback
Replies: 3
Views: 57

A short story.. looking for feedback

I have over 50 stories varying in terms of content and am unsure what to do with them.. losing my marbles I melt all over again as soon as you smile at me and those sparky eyes of yours tell me that tonight I?m going to enjoy you in ways I haven?t thought of yet. You grab my hand and pull me close ...