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Posted: **Sun Mar 08, 2015 8:47 am**

Posted: **Sun Mar 15, 2015 6:04 pm**

Thanks; and sorry for the delay.

A few points.....
Fr Malcom credited as Malcolm?

I have assumed that the text in carets (>) represents scene-titles. Is this
correct?

I have omitted your sc. 6 as it seems to have no title; I don't understand what
you mean by "pegging"; and I can't work out what happens from those caps.

Scc. 3/6 are a little short on sex-notes.

Posted: **Sat Mar 21, 2015 11:28 am**

>>> Fr Malcom credited as Malcolm?

No, thats my fault. Malcom as usually.

>>>I don't understand what you mean by "pegging";

Pegging means woman fucks man with dildo.
In this scene they uses double dildo with one end in her pussy.

>>> I have assumed that the text in carets (>) represents scene-titles. Is this correct?

Yes, partially. Some scenes have its own scene title. Some ones have title of scene musical theme. Like this:
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All titles is french so english titles is my translation.

Original title / English translation
1. Scene des ruines / Scene at the ruins
2. Scene de la Princess Loulou / Scene of the Princess Loulou
3. Scene du diable / Scene with the Devil
4. Scene du chantier / Scene at the construction site
5. Gang-bang lesbiennes / Lesbian gang-bang
6. Cha-cha / Cha-cha
7. Scene de Loulou at le bergers / Scene of Loulou with the shepherds
8. Scene des blanchisseuses / Scene of laundresses
9. Les jours suivants. Sea, sex and sun / The following days. Sea, sex and sun.
10. 3 devant 2 derriere / 3 forward 2 back

>>> I have omitted your sc. 6 as it seems to have no title;

Musical theme of this scene have title "cha-cha"

>>> Scc. 3/6 are a little short on sex-notes.

Little short? What does it mean?

Posted: **Sat Mar 21, 2015 11:56 am**

10. 3 devant 2 derriere / 3 forward 2 back
====
better translation?: 3 in front, 2 behind (or "two in the back" if you like)

Posted: **Sat Mar 21, 2015 12:42 pm**

Thanks. I was not sure in this title translation.

Posted: **Sat Mar 21, 2015 3:41 pm**

previews wrote:
> Pegging means woman fucks man with dildo.
You learn something new every day : -)

> All titles is french so english titles is my translation.
Egafd's general rule is to assume that its denizens are all highly educated
and multilingual - so French, Italian and German titles are left intact. It's
a little unfair on the Slavs, Scans and Basques, but that's life.

> Little short? What does it mean?
You're not specific as to what sex acts are performed.

It also seems I omitted sc. 10 in the first draft.....

Posted: **Sat Mar 21, 2015 4:45 pm**

>>> You're not specific as to what sex acts are performed.

I use IAFD rules - out of specification for scenes with oral and vaginal sex only.

Posted: **Sat Mar 21, 2015 5:05 pm**

previews wrote:
> I use IAFD rules - out of specification for scenes with oral
> and vaginal sex only.
That's up to you. But users may find the review less useful due to those tacit
omissions. While egafd has no specific rules on sex-acts [other than prohibiting
mention of some of the stranger ones] ideally any review, anywhere, should
be as complete and explicit as possible.

Posted: **Fri Mar 27, 2015 3:44 pm**

>>> While egafd has no specific rules on sex-acts

Thats exactly why i use iafd rules

Posted: **Fri Mar 27, 2015 4:03 pm**

previews wrote:
> Thats exactly why i use iafd rules

Which would be fine -were those rules consistent and comprehensive.
IMO they're not. For example, if a [particularly energetic] girl does a
BJ, a b/g and a DP in 3 scenes of one film, one has no way of determining
which scenes contain which act/s, unless there happens to be an accompanying
link to a detailed review.

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