Miss Niles demos the FleshJack
Posted: Wed Dec 01, 2010 12:02 pm
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Re: Miss Niles demos the FleshJack
Posted: Wed Dec 01, 2010 1:14 pm
Re: Miss Niles demos the FleshJack
Posted: Thu Dec 02, 2010 4:56 am
Thanks Paul x
Re: Miss Niles demos the FleshJack
Posted: Thu Dec 02, 2010 7:12 am
Oh blimey.
What they did wrong:
-Didn't mention that Fleshlights cost ?50-?70 each and the inserts are ?20 each!
-Music on that ad is way too loud. Lyrics being sung over the presenter?! Is that song needed or even cleared for copyright?
-Using the mic on the camera means she's recorded way too quiet!
-Not editing out the director saying "action" at the start
-Putting a bloody huge pink logo onscreen so we can't see the toy being used!
What they did right:
Getting Krystal to host it. She's lush. Everything else is exactly why porn will never go mainstream - any college boy with a camcorder thinks they're a filmmaker.
Sorry but if people don't tell you why it's not working you'll never improve!
What they did wrong:
-Didn't mention that Fleshlights cost ?50-?70 each and the inserts are ?20 each!
-Music on that ad is way too loud. Lyrics being sung over the presenter?! Is that song needed or even cleared for copyright?
-Using the mic on the camera means she's recorded way too quiet!
-Not editing out the director saying "action" at the start
-Putting a bloody huge pink logo onscreen so we can't see the toy being used!
What they did right:
Getting Krystal to host it. She's lush. Everything else is exactly why porn will never go mainstream - any college boy with a camcorder thinks they're a filmmaker.
Sorry but if people don't tell you why it's not working you'll never improve!
Re: Miss Niles demos the FleshJack
Posted: Thu Dec 02, 2010 7:40 am
Hey Bill Thanks for your comments
these ones were just simple quickies for You Tube to raise awareness
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plus tengagirls.co.uk
thankssssssssssss xx
these ones were just simple quickies for You Tube to raise awareness
checkout
handjobstore.com
plus tengagirls.co.uk
thankssssssssssss xx