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[jj]

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The second cap appears to be of Britnee.

[alec]

I refer you to your own post on this title

[jj]

"In the prelude two girls briefly strip- one is Orsi Shine, the other a blonde
unknown.... ".
With reference to the pics that followed I would have read that to mean the
first girl illustrated was Orsi Shine [i.e. Britnee], the second the unknown.

[alec]

I can't think why I didn't read it like that. Maybe it was because, having recently dealt with Britnee in another title in the series, I assumed she was mentioned lower down the post. Picture now removed.

Anyway you'll have to make allowances for someone trying to speed read with poor eyesight.

Having said that, when you post pics of several girls in one scene / 'paragraph', it's not always clear who is who to someone familiar neither with the girls nor the title. Maybe it would be clearer to have 'sub-paragraphs' for each girl.

[jj]

> Anyway you'll have to make allowances for someone trying to speed read with
poor eyesight.
I always try to make allowances for your feet of clay : -)))

> ....Maybe it would be clearer to have 'sub-paragraphs' for each girl.
Point taken; sometimes, in the heat of composition, it's hard to stand outside
and see flaws that are readily apparent to others.

[alec]

Thanks in advance.