DVD Cover Design - How Am I Doing ?

[puretotty]

Nineteen... but am feeling our style more for the impact we want to make But thanks for the input...

Hair as been fixed... working on text now

[puretotty]

Changed the font a little... changed the colour, added a stroke and a drop shadow... not changed the size yet...

What you reckon Asylum, better or worse ?

[IMG]http://modelgirlfriends.com/images/bann ... nkDVD2.jpg[/IMG]

[JB]

You should definitely post at the final size - the text in particular looks like it might be too small.

[puretotty]

too small ! ahhhh... dont say that... to be honest I think at 220 x 313 its hard to do the text so it reads really anyways... looking on your site I cant make out the text on most of the covers... the pictures do the selling... any you get the featured artists by the text you write... but will do

Oh and here's the backcover so far...

[IMG]http://modelgirlfriends.com/images/bann ... kCover.jpg[/IMG]

[puretotty]

OK the real size as it would appear on SB...

[IMG]http://modelgirlfriends.com/images/bann ... 20x313.jpg[/IMG]

[JB]

puretotty wrote:

> OK the real size as it would appear on SB...

Looks pretty good actually. I'm a geek by nature, not a designer, so what do I know? !wink!

[clare40dd]

i think its crap sorry pics are good though

[clare40dd]

names are too close together and dont stand out
how about the main image in the middle smaller then in each corners featured girls on a black background but hey what do i know just my opinion

[puretotty]

lol sorry Clare... I will try harder lol

Thanks JB yes I am pretty pleased with it... the pictures are clear enough at that size, you can see both the studio name "Hard On Films" and the title "MyFirstPink"

Names of the girls are readable if you squint a little bit... with those names on the title it should attract some interest...

The first MyFirstPink DVD will contain scenes with

Poppy Morgan
Leigh Logan
Katie K
Cate Harrington
Natalia X
Sasha Rose
Jools Brook
Sasha Cane
and possibly Lacey Price (not sure if that scene will be on there)

Will work on the 2nd DVD when I have every thing up and running... got some interesting names I would liek to include on the second DVD