Miss Niles demos the FleshJack

[TengaGirls]

Check out Krystal and the USA `s top selling sex toy


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mx9Rh2hUBzM

[MISTER C]

[Krystal Niles]

Thanks Paul x

[Bill Malone]

Oh blimey.

What they did wrong:
-Didn't mention that Fleshlights cost ?50-?70 each and the inserts are ?20 each!
-Music on that ad is way too loud. Lyrics being sung over the presenter?! Is that song needed or even cleared for copyright?
-Using the mic on the camera means she's recorded way too quiet!
-Not editing out the director saying "action" at the start
-Putting a bloody huge pink logo onscreen so we can't see the toy being used!

What they did right:
Getting Krystal to host it. She's lush. Everything else is exactly why porn will never go mainstream - any college boy with a camcorder thinks they're a filmmaker.

Sorry but if people don't tell you why it's not working you'll never improve!

[Krystal Niles]

Hey Bill Thanks for your comments

these ones were just simple quickies for You Tube to raise awareness

checkout

handjobstore.com

plus tengagirls.co.uk

thankssssssssssss xx