Criticism needed.

[Shaun?]

Have just spent a dull bank holiday making use of Freeserve and their webbuilder page, have a look and tell me whats wrong or could be changed.



TIA

[Hugh Jampton]

You're boring, have appalling dress sense, bad breath that would stun a monkey at ten paces and no sense of humour. That enough criticism for one day?








( Sorry couldn't resist it - I know it was childish )

[jj]

So childish that I'm having a tantrum because you beat me to it.

[Shaun?]

School for you two tomorrow, work for the adults.

[jj]

I was out doing a PROPER job today while you were messing about in cyberspace, young fella.
Can you lose that awful Freeserve logo or does it come as standard? More Wendy definitely needed, and with fewer clothes.

[woodgnome]

whatever, his taste in britporn sites is not to be faulted!

[Shaun?]

The Freeserve logo is one of the downsides of using their construction program. If you want more of Wendy with less clothes then you'll have to sign up to her site.

[jj]

Ah, so there are limits to your God-like powers !!

[wolfie]

You look very nice in the white polo necked, short- sleeved jumper.

[biv]

Well the pics are ok but you need a few lessons on web design. Apart from that its an ok attempt. Why dont you show us some pics with ya knob up them much better though lol. yeah more pics of wendy more xxx aswell. this will surely draw attention away from the crap freeserve banners etc lol